For literacy I'm writing about strange and wonderful animals, which is our topic for three weeks. I have been creating a sign about marbled cone snails which have venom that can kill 20 people in a few seconds with a drop. If you see one don't go near.. I think I did well in explaining it is dangerous and to stay away from it and use pictures. Overall I think I did a good job. Thank you for reading, feel welcome to give some feedback.
Kia ora, I am a student at Parkview Pārua School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, May 14, 2021
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Kia ora my name is Bianca. Your blog post is really interesting. I never knew that these even existed or how dangerous they are. It's insane how they could kill someone so fast. It made me think that I may have had many close calls with these snails and not even know. Next time maybe you could add exactly where you can find these on a beach. If you want you can check out my blog.
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